El Ambiente - Formal Writing #3

¿La próxima vez usted ve alguien tirando basura en el suelo, qué hará usted? ¿Muy probable, nada, el derecho? Pienso que usted debe decir algo. ¡El ambiente se muere! Todos tan son preocupados por terroristas, pero allí hacen ni son terroristas si nuestro planeta se muere, y está en lo es la manera de llegar. Hay muchas maneras que usted puede ayudar a salvar el ambiente. Usted debe consumir menos y para deber encontrar que una manera alterna tirar su basura, tal como lo quemando. Usted debe tratar al coche de uso compartido a muchos lugares o utilizar el transporte público. El bióxido de carbono que usted emite, rompe un hoyo en nuestra atmósfera, y bastante pronto los rayos verdaderos de UV de sol será emitido en nuestra superficie porque nosotros no tenemos protección contra ello ya. Pienso que el ambiente necesita mucha ayuda y nosotros debemos ser el uno hacerlo.
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Chantel said...

Name: Chantel

Date: November 27, 2007

Assignment: Formal Writing #3

Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
no

I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes

I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes

I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes

I try to make my writing interesting.
yes

I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no

I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
no

I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes

I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes

If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes

I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes

I check my spelling.
yes

I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes

I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes

I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes

I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes


What I think I did very well on in this assignment:

I think I expressed my opinion well on this one.

What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:

I think I could have stayed on topic more.

November 27, 2007 at 7:52 PM

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