¡Hola Senora!
Gracias para hablar conmigo acerca de su carrera. Pienso que esa negocio/publicidad interesa muy y usted ciertamente me dio muchas cosas a pensar acerca de. Pienso que quiero la negocio/publicidad porque he estado en esa clase para tan largo. He trabajado en la venta anuncios ya tan usted tiene razón, yo tengo la experiencia en ello. ¡Espero en este negacio/la publicidad acampa aprendo que muchas nuevas cosas para hacerme quiere entrar esos campos aún más! Gracias para tomar el tiempo de ayudarme, significo realmente mucho a mí.
Le saluda atentamente,
Chantel
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Name: Chantel
Date: November 27, 2007
Assignment: Informal Writing #2
Before writing, I think of what I know about the topic. I make a list of ideas, words, and phrases I might use.
no
I organize my thoughts and ideas so that I can focus on one central idea.
yes
I choose ideas and examples that are appropriate for this culture.
yes
I make sure the writing has a definite beginning, middle, and end.
yes
I try to make my writing interesting.
yes
I write a first draft and then I reread and revise.
no
I check to make sure that my writing makes sense.
no
I make sure the sentences relate to each other.
yes
I use familiar language structures so I know I am writing correctly.
yes
If I do not know a word, I use a word or phrase I do know.
yes
I make sure punctuation is correct according to the rules in this language.
yes
I check my spelling.
yes
I check my use of verb tenses (present, past, future, etc.).
yes
I check my use of gender and agreements (masculine, feminine, neuter).
yes
I ask someone who knows the language (classmate) to read my writing and give me feedback.
yes
I make sure the final copy is legible (handwritten or typed).
yes
What I think I did very well on in this assignment:
I think I wrote about what I really felt.
What I think I need to focus/improve on next time:
I think I could have explained myself a little more.
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